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The source that follows is:
- Source A: 19th-century prose fiction
- An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge by Ambrose Bierce
An extract from a work first published in 1890.
This extract is taken from Ambrose Bierce's An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge, set during the American Civil War. A civilian planter awaits hanging on a bridge as soldiers stand in formal silence and he fixates on details, his family, and thoughts of escape.
Source A
1 Excepting the group of four at the center of the bridge, not a man moved. The company faced the bridge, staring stonily, motionless. The sentinels, facing the banks of the stream, might have been statues to adorn the bridge. The captain stood with folded arms, silent, observing the work of his subordinates, but making no sign. Death is a dignitary who when he comes
6 announced is to be received with formal manifestations of respect, even by those most familiar with him. In the code of military etiquette silence and fixity are forms of deference. The man who was engaged in being hanged was apparently about thirty-five years
11 of age. He was a civilian, if one might judge from his habit, which was that of a planter. His features were good—a straight nose, firm mouth, broad forehead, from which his long, dark hair was combed straight back, falling behind his ears to the collar of his well fitting frock coat. He wore a moustache and pointed beard, but no whiskers; his eyes were large and dark
16 gray, and had a kindly expression which one would hardly have expected in one whose neck was in the hemp. Evidently this was no vulgar assassin. The liberal military code makes provision for hanging many kinds of persons, and gentlemen are not excluded.
21 The preparations being complete, the two private soldiers stepped aside and each drew away the plank upon which he had been standing. The sergeant turned to the captain, saluted and placed himself immediately behind that officer, who in turn moved apart one pace. These movements left the condemned man and the sergeant standing on the two ends of the same plank, which spanned three
26 of the cross-ties of the bridge. The end upon which the civilian stood almost, but not quite, reached a fourth. This plank had been held in place by the weight of the captain; it was now held by that of the sergeant. At a signal from the former the latter would step aside, the plank would tilt and the condemned man go down between two ties. The arrangement commended itself to
31 his judgement as simple and effective. His face had not been covered nor his eyes bandaged. He looked a moment at his “unsteadfast footing,” then let his gaze wander to the swirling water of the stream racing madly beneath his feet. A piece of dancing driftwood caught his attention and his eyes followed it down the current. How slowly it appeared to move! What a sluggish stream!
36 He closed his eyes in order to fix his last thoughts upon his wife and children. The water, touched to gold by the early sun, the brooding mists under the banks at some distance down the stream, the fort, the soldiers, the piece of drift—all had distracted him. And now he became conscious of a new
41 disturbance. Striking through the thought of his dear ones was sound which he could neither ignore nor understand, a sharp, distinct, metallic percussion like the stroke of a blacksmith’s hammer upon the anvil; it had the same ringing quality. He wondered what it was, and whether immeasurably distant or near by— it seemed both. Its recurrence was regular, but as slow as the
46 tolling of a death knell. He awaited each new stroke with impatience and—he knew not why—apprehension. The intervals of silence grew progressively longer; the delays became maddening. With their greater infrequency the sounds increased in strength and sharpness. They hurt his ear like the thrust of a knife; he feared he would shriek. What he heard was the ticking of his watch.
51 He unclosed his eyes and saw again the water below him. “If I could free my hands,” he thought, “I might throw off the noose and spring into the stream. By diving I could evade the bullets and, swimming vigorously, reach the bank, take to the woods and get away home. My home, thank God, is as yet outside
56 their lines; my wife and little ones are still beyond the invader’s farthest advance.” As these thoughts, which have here to be set down in words, were flashed into the doomed man’s brain rather than evolved from it the captain nodded to the
61 sergeant. The sergeant stepped aside.
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- The marks for questions are shown in brackets.
- Time allowed: 1 hour 45 minutes
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- There are 40 marks for Section A and 40 marks for Section B.
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- You will be assessed on the quality of your reading in Section A.
- You will be assessed on the quality of your writing in Section B.
Advice
- You are advised to spend about 15 minutes reading through the source and all five questions you have to answer.
- You should make sure you leave sufficient time to check your answers.
Section A: Reading
Answer all questions in this section. You are advised to spend about 45 minutes on this section.
Question 1
Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 5.
Answer all parts of this question.
Choose one answer for each question.
1.1 Approximately how old is the man?
- About twenty-five years old
- About thirty-five years old
- About forty-five years old
[1 mark]
1.2 According to the narrator, what expression is seen in the eyes of the man being hanged?
- A kind expression
- A fierce glare
- A vacant stare
[1 mark]
1.3 Which statement describes the man's facial hair?
- The man wore a moustache and a pointed beard
- The man wore full whiskers and a thick beard
- The man was clean-shaven with no beard
[1 mark]
1.4 What is said about the man's eyes?
- The man's eyes were large and dark grey and had a kindly expression
- The man's eyes were small and pale blue and had a stern expression
- The man's eyes were narrow and black and had a cold expression
[1 mark]
Question 2
Look in detail at this extract, from lines 31 to 40 of the source:
31 his judgement as simple and effective. His face had not been covered nor his eyes bandaged. He looked a moment at his “unsteadfast footing,” then let his gaze wander to the swirling water of the stream racing madly beneath his feet. A piece of dancing driftwood caught his attention and his eyes followed it down the current. How slowly it appeared to move! What a sluggish stream!
36 He closed his eyes in order to fix his last thoughts upon his wife and children. The water, touched to gold by the early sun, the brooding mists under the banks at some distance down the stream, the fort, the soldiers, the piece of drift—all had distracted him. And now he became conscious of a new
How does the writer use language here to show the man's shifting sense of movement and time? You could include the writer's choice of:
- words and phrases
- language features and techniques
- sentence forms.
[8 marks]
Question 3
You now need to think about the structure of the source as a whole. This text is from the start of a story.
How has the writer structured the text to create a sense of menace?
You could write about:
- how menace intensifies throughout the source
- how the writer uses structure to create an effect
- the writer's use of any other structural features, such as changes in mood, tone or perspective.
[8 marks]
Question 4
For this question focus on the second part of the source, from line 21 to the end.
In this part of the source, the ticking of the man’s watch is described as if it is a loud, painful hammer sound. The writer suggests that the man’s fear is making time itself seem to slow down before his death.
To what extent do you agree and/or disagree with this statement?
In your response, you could:
- consider your impressions of the condemned man's perception of his watch ticking
- comment on the methods the writer uses to convey the man's intense psychological fear
- support your response with references to the text.
[20 marks]
Question 5
A former industrial site in your area is being redeveloped, and a local group asks for creative writing about its past working life.
Choose one of the options below for your entry.
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Option A: Describe a disused engine room from your imagination. You may choose to use the picture provided for ideas:
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Option B: Write the opening of a story about friendship in a workplace.
(24 marks for content and organisation, 16 marks for technical accuracy)
[40 marks]